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Blind Candidate: Chapter Sixteen



When morning came, Chase and Ciara’s wounds were already healed, so the three of them first ate their breakfast and planned out their next move. Liam had been sharpening his sickle, and Chase had been fixing his leg, using the materials he gathered at Thinnest River: coconut shells, and coconut leaves.
After that, everyone turned to their next destination, which was the Bridge, and climbed up the hill. Ciara couldn't help but admire Chase's talent. With only the usage of limited materials, Chase had been able to recreate his destroyed leg from scratch. Ciara knew they've been getting closer to the bridge. The ground turned dry, and the direction of the wind was blowing harder from the east side.
“It’s going to rain.” Chase muttered.
He was right. Ciara could smell the damp air rising and moist coming from the sky.
“We’re getting closer,” Ciara said, “Just a little bit farther.”
She recognized the signature muddy path trails going to the entrance of the Metric. 5 minutes more…Ciara thought. We’re getting closer to Metric…to my home. But instead of feeling excited about the trip, Ciara felt a horrible sensation swarming inside her stomach. What is this feeling? Ciara thought as she took another step, feeling the mud sticking underneath her foot. Why do I feel so…afraid…?
Ciara should be excited. If not, she should be happy. This was Metric after all. But what will be there to greet her? Everyone was dead. The village was a ghost town. What good will happen to her there?
“Why won’t you put me down, Liam?" Chase said, "This is embarrassing, you know,” Ciara knew that Liam was carrying Chase on his back, because his little brother was slightly recovering from the bridge accident.
“Your body is still recovering, so quit whining like a baby,” Liam scolded his brother.
“But you're tired," Chase protested, "You’ve been carrying me for over an hour,”
“No can do Chase, I told you, I’m strong, right?” Liam said brightly and Chase made a disapproving sound. And then Ciara heard Liam stop.
“Li—” Ciara asked, but Liam cut her off.
“It’s raining!” Liam said urgently and Ciara saw his outline zooming past her.
Before Ciara could say anything, the sky grumbled and immediately rain started to pour down on them. Why is Liam so terrified of the rain? Quickly, Ciara put her hood on and bolted forward, joining the Crude Brothers as they ran through the rain.
Ciara panted. Her senses were getting distorted as the rain showered heavily down the land. The fog was getting colder and Ciara kept running through the rain, struggling from the cold.
“Hate this rain!” Liam shouted. Liam is on my right side, just ahead of me…Ciara thought. 3 more minutes and we’ll reach the Metric.
“Don’t worry, we’re almost there, I could see the wooden post of the Metric entrance,” Chase said.
2 minutes more…Ciara thought.
Ciara recalled something from history class since she was a child. Each region had a symbol. Arc for Metric. Epicenter for the square gate. Part for fences. Group for the brick walls and Layer for the cement pillars.
1 more minute…Ciara thought. The ground is getting slimy, and the cobble paths are getting higher…45 seconds…
“Whoa!” Ciara heard Liam suddenly skidding into a stop. Water splashed across her knees.
“What’s wrong?” Chase asked, and Ciara felt Chase’s wet fingers tangling her hand. Chase pulled her to where Liam was and abruptly stopped, “Goodness!”
Ciara immediately knew what the Crude Brothers were talking about. Metric wasn’t in good shape. Unexpectedly, Ciara dashed forward, ignoring Chase and Liam’s shouts from behind. My village, Ciara thought, her heart drumming louder in her chest. Ignoring the rain, she ran forward until her right foot hit something, and crashed face-first on the muddy ground. Pain jolted her body.
Images flashed inside her head. The arc gate—the villagers who mocked her—Eliza’s luxurious house near the West Side—the boys who teased her name—and her family’s miniature cottage.
Ciara lay on the ground, inhaling a strong scent of burned ashes, moist rain and wood saw. Tears drizzled down her face, merging with the rain. She choked a sob and scraped the ground with her fingernails.
Metric is nothing but a deserted island. Everything has been destroyed. Ciara thought. Virgo did this—I did this, because I’m the Candidate.
Something acidic struck her nose. Ciara gagged. What is this smell? Ciara tried to cover her mouth, but it was too late. The lethal smell was already making her giddy, and it was suffocating her.
Ciara collapsed on the ground, her head throbbing in pain. She shakily reached out her hand, trying to distinguish the blurry surroundings, and failed. What is happening to me? Her breathings turned shallow, and her body started to quiver in the cold. Ciara closed her eyes—when suddenly, wet lips were pressed against her mouth. Sweet, acidic apple cider flavors burst in her tongue. Something changed. Energy grew back inside her body, making Ciara stronger like never before. A Swirl, Ciara thought. Then the lips were gone, and Ciara could feel someone standing on her left side.
“Liam,” Ciara whispered as she scrambled up to her feet.
“What are you thinking, Ciara? Are you trying to kill yourself?” Liam yelled. Ciara didn’t answer him. “Hey—listen to me, I don’t want to see anyone dying in front of me, you hear me? You should have listened to my go signal before you ran off on your own, stupid!”
“I’m…sorry…” Ciara lowered her head.
“You inhaled some toxic nuclear substance, so I gave you the Antidote Swirl through mouth.” Liam scolded her. “If I didn’t give you the Antidote Swirl, you could have died. Nuclear toxic can kill you in a matter of seconds if you don’t have the antidote.”
“I’m sorry,” Ciara repeated.
“Geez,” Liam sighed, “Don’t scare us like that, you know.”
Ciara nodded, “Where’s Chase?” Ciara asked groggily.
“He’s at the entrance. Don’t worry, he’s fine,” Liam’s voice grew serious. “But that’s not the point, Ciara. The point is... we need to stick together at all times,” he continued, “You can’t do what you want. You need to trust us, especially your comrades.”
Ciara sighed and Liam took her hand, dragging her to where Chase was. The Crude Brothers had already drunk their Swirls, so the three of them could now freely walk around the destroyed village. Liam carried Chase on his back and became the leader.
Every time Ciara took a step forward, pain squeezed her heart. Images quickly flowed inside her head. The once busy market was now nothing, but a land full of mud. How many people were decayed underneath these soils? Ciara would never know. She could hear and smell nothing, but rotten soil and burnt wood. Aside from the market, the school was also one of her most important memories in life. The left side was Metric’s Community School, and now it was nothing, but a pile of broken wood post.
And then Ciara stopped. Withered roses…the smell of polished piano and wood…Ciara though, it couldn’t be…
Without thinking, Ciara fastened her pace and ran forward. Her heart stumbled inside her chest. I know this scent…Ciara thought. My home!
“Ciara!”
Everything went fast. By the time she realized what had happened—Ciara was on the ground and felt someone tightly squeezing her neck, blocking her windpipe. Pain struck her head. Ciara struggled, but the grip around her neck was too strong as if the person was crushing her throat. The weight of the body is too heavy and the sizes of his hands are too large. Ciara thought. Someone has come to kill me.
“Filthy Rein guards! Why did you come back to this village!” the man angrily shouted, the echo of his voice vibrating in front of her face. He must be a Metric survivor, Ciara thought. Suddenly, her head was being smashed on the ground. The man continued, “Tell me, or I’ll smash your head until you die!”
Ciara choked, gasping, but the man keep shoving her face on the ground, scratching her skin in the process. “I…not…Rein—”
“Ciara!” Liam’s voice cut through her mind, and the next thing she knew, the man was gone. Ciara wheezed and heard a loud thump from a short distance beside her. Liam…he’s…holding the man back, Ciara breathed heavily, two shuffling sounds…two voices yelling…and another thump on the ground…they’re wrestling…
 “Ciara, are you alright!?” Ciara heard another thump beside her. It’s Chase. “Here, let me help you,” Gently, Chase pulled her up. Ciara touched the back of her head and felt blood dripping the sides of her fingers. It’s still raining, Ciara wondered. That will wash the blood off my head. Ciara asked dizzily. “What happened?”
“Apparently that man thinks that you’re one of the Rein guards.” Chase said quickly. Another punch, another groaned…more shuffling of bodies, rolling on the ground, Ciara studied.
Ciara heard the man’s body movements stop. He’s not dead, Ciara thought, panic rose up in her chest. She remembered the incident when Eliza died. That wouldn’t happen to the man. Ciara believed in Liam, she believed that he wouldn’t kill anyone…
Loud breathings coming from the man’s chest…Ciara thought. I can’t focus with this rain…Ciara thought. I can’t hear Liam’s deep breathings. They must have stopped fighting…but why?
“What’s wrong, you sick bastard,” Liam panted. Ciara sighed in relief. Good, he hasn’t killed the man yet. “You already had enough of my punches, huh? Well, that’s what you get for beating Ciara like th—”
“You’re that murderer!” the man screamed and Ciara sensed Liam froze. The man continued, “You’re that boy who killed the Mirriam couple!”
Mirriam couple? Ciara tried to recall the names, but she couldn’t remember anyone named Mirriam. Wait, Ciara paused. Couple…There was only one couple she knew, and that was Eliza’s parents.
Liam accidentally killed the couple. Chase’s words echoed her thoughts. He didn’t mean it….
That was the answer. Ciara looked up and closed her eyes, trying to sense what Liam and man were doing. At 9 o’clock, just a short distance beside me, there’s a strong wind breezing through my direction. Ciara calculated. Strong wind is caused by deep breathings, depending on the body weight and size. If the wind is strong, that must be where the man was standing.
Liam must be standing on the opposite side, though I don’t sense something from him…Ciara thought. I can’t hear any breathings coming from me…Liam must be shocked and frozen in place.
What an awful timing, Ciara thought.
“I was right!” the man shouted, still breathing heavily, “I remember you from that time. You were with him!” He must be pointing at Chase.
“Leave my brother out of this!” Liam roared.
Don’t kill him, Liam. Ciara thought. Control your anger.
The man burst into a shriek. “You’re cold-blooded murderer.” the man continued, “If I have known that you’re still alive, I would have killed you when you killed those couple. Those couple were my best friends,” the man continued. “You see, I was on my way to open the door when I heard a rampage inside the house. Panicked, I went to the window and watched how it happened,” the man sniggered, “I don’t know how you did it, but by the time I witnessed the incident, those two were already dead.”
“Well, it’s a good thing you didn’t watched the whole thing,” Liam said in a mischievous way.
“You’re nothing, but a devil,” the man snarled, and Ciara heard tapping and splashing sounds getting close to her left side. The man is lunging at Liam. Ciara thought. Since I can’t hear his body movements because of the rain...I can’t analyze what he is doing…
Suddenly, there was a yell and a sharp sound of thump and crack.
“What are they doing?” Ciara asked Chase beside her.
“Liam countered the man’s punch easily with his right hand,” Chase said as if he was shaken, “I-I didn’t realized that someone was watching us at that time…I should have blocked the windows or something. I’m so stupid…”
“It’s all in the past,” Ciara reassured him.
“Just give it up, will you?” Liam gritted his teeth. Liam must be holding back, Ciara thought. “You’re injured and you’re heavily bruised. You have no chance of winning against m—” Ciara a sharp stab and someone groaning.
“Liam!” Chase shouted.
Ciara’s heart stomped. She could smell coming from the two figures. If Chase shouted Liam’s name, it could mean big trouble.
“Ugh,” Liam coughed. The source of the blood comes from Liam. Ciara thought. It’s not from the man, because the direction of the wind comes from the east side. Ciara sniffed. The smell of the blood gets thicker. Something struck Liam…
The man chuckled. Ciara’s eyes shook. The man must have stabbed Liam…but how? Ciara thought and something snapped in her mind. When Liam countered the man’s punch, Ciara couldn’t guess what the man was doing because of the harsh rain. So if the man used one hand as a decoy, he must have dug the knife and stabbed Liam when he wasn’t looking.
“That’s what you get for killing my best friends,” the man spat, and Ciara heard a thump and a splash on the ground. Chase shouted Liam’s name, but Ciara wasn’t paying attention until she realized that Chase had made a run toward the man.
What is he doing!? Ciara thought. Is Chase trying to get himself killed!?
Ciara heard a swish, the splashing of water and a thump on the ground. The fear in her heart grew stronger. Gratefully the rain had calm down, giving Ciara time to focus on her senses.
“Please, Sir. We didn’t mean to cause this commotion,” Chase panted, “Our friend just wanted to visit this place because she’s a Metric survivor.”
 “As if I will believe you,” the man said, “Murderers. You’re the Vixens, right!? Vixens are nothing, but people who kill and fight. I don’t have to waste my time with you peo—”
“Stop it!” Ciara shouted, “He’s telling the truth!” The idea quickly came to Ciara's mind. She brushed the fallen sides of her hair to show the man the mark on her cheek, “See!?”
“C…iara…” she heard Liam groaned and saw Chase’s dark figure sitting on the ground. So it finally stopped raining. Ciara thought. The rain had vanished and everything was becoming clear again.
 “My words...” the man gasped. Ciara raised an eyebrow, “Y-you’re really like us..." the man’s voice turned calm.  “Anyone who has that symbol on their right cheek means they won’t betray their village.”
“That’s what we are trying to tell you, old man.” Liam grunted. He must be drinking a Swirl…because I could hear gulping sounds from his throat, Ciara thought.
“Liam, are you alright?” Chase asked. Ciara saw the outlines of the two brothers standing up. She didn’t even realize that they were heavily soaked from the rain.
“Yeah, thanks to you two,” Liam said and turned to the man, “We didn’t come here to kill you. We came here because we wanted to know what happened to Metric, for our friend.”
I can't hear anymore harsh breathings and the angry presence from the man. Ciara thought. Good, he must have calm down when he noticed the mark on my cheek.
 “Do you know Leverie Plop?” Ciara asked the only name that was familiar in Metric. Her sister was a celebrity, so people easily recognized her.
The man gasped, “The Leverie Plop? You can’t mean…” he paused and continued, “You’re the youngest Plop. The fisherman’s daughter.”
Ciara slowly nodded, and to her surprise, the old man hugged her. “I didn’t even recognize you…I could still remember you when you were little, but now, you look—different.”
“That’s because she’s blind.” Liam interrupted their conversation. “She came here with us because she wanted to know what caused Metric’s destruction.”
Ciara felt the heavy tension between her and the old man. Her sister was very famous in Metric, so bringing up her name meant something—either a family member, or a friend.
“I see,” the man said, “I’m sorry for attacking you like that. If I’ve known that you’ve become blind, I should have welcomed you, though there’s nothing left in Metric anymore,” he cleared his throat, “Anyway, come with me and bring your fox friends with you," he paused, ‘Also, since you three are here, you must have met Eliza by now, right?”
Ciara heard Liam's Adam apple bobbled up.
“I’m sorry,” Chase answered the question, “but she didn’t make it.”
The man sighed, “I know,” he continued, “because you killed her.”
Ciara felt Liam stiffened beside her. Oh no. Ciara braced for another fight, but she couldn’t sense any anger radiating from the man.
“I know…” Liam croaked.
To Ciara’s surprise, the man sighed, “Well, at least she won’t be suffering anymore. I think its best that everyone should die, instead of being alive, you know what I mean?”
“Wait, you’re not mad at Liam?” Chase asked, panic in his tone.
“Getting mad will not bring everyone to life,” the man replied, “Also, I trust you and Ciara, but that doesn’t mean I trust that murderer.”
Liam snorted, and Ciara heard Chase shaking his head.
“Anyway, Ciara,” the man said, “Call me Victor. I’m sure you don’t remember me, because of your torture in Part. But as a fellow Metric, I'll let you know that I’m the one who taught your sister to play the piano.”
Ciara’s eyes widened, and Victor laughed.
“Ciara’s not dumb, you know,” Liam interrupted the conversation, “so don’t try to trick her.”
“I’m not talking to you, murderer,” Victor hissed and grunted, “We’re wasting time here. Let’s go.”
While the three of her companions already moved out, Ciara stayed on her position, gazing at the familiar house beside her. I’m home, Ciara said in her mind. If she wasn’t blind, what would be the appearance of her house right now?
Ciara wanted to touch her house, but she retreated back. The house is burned down. Nothing left except of burned ashes and wood. Ciara thought. Did my parents died in here? Tears slipped from her eyes. Why didn’t I say something before they died?
Ciara frowned and shook her head.
This was the place where her parents died, her sister died, and Ciara grew up. I won’t be able to go home to this place ever again, Ciara said in her mind, Goodbye.



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